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I think the card is pretty good at base. It's really nice to have a card with big impact on turn 7 as well as solid options sooner than that.
Totally agree. I'm probably trying to gas it up too much, I'd just prefer a MDFC that drafters get as excited about the front as much the back. I might pick Disciple of Freyalise pretty highly because I have a lot of sac synergies alongside cards like Monoist Sentry, or Stump Stomp or your Orzhov duel early because I want removal, and that helps pull me into those colors.

I think your WU duel you have falls into that same potential trap that I'm mostly just picking it as a land if I'm in those colors already, unless maybe there's some angel synergy to reward there too?

I still think that pattern is good enough for smoothing out 'non-games' of magic, and ensuring some fixing goes around later into packs, it just doesn't get me excited to draft it, you know?

I think most your other cards reward both sides pretty well though, and I like your use of official but oft unseen art to blend in well with the rest of the cube.

My main concern is that this makes every fetch into a double fetch if it earthbends itself. Maybe "if it entered from your hand" or something makes sense here to nerf that interaction a little bit?
Thank you for catching this! That's definitely not what I want going on, but I also don't want to nerf the main appeal of the card which is popping off with your Hedge Shredder, Aftermath Analyst, or Lumra, Bellow of the Woods.

Here's a fixed version (I hope?)

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I also changed up the art, if you don't mind weighing in with a preference!

I run out of room for the reminder text (which unfortunately happens with Earthbender Ascension too) but that's the point of bringing in enough cards that it isn't a one-off keyword.

Here's one other custom meant to support the archetype:

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Not quite sure of the balance on this one either. It might be a little overstated and undercosted on it's ability, but it follows the formula of the actual Hedge Whisperer and Bitter Work to a T.

I could be talked out of the passive ability, and the 'Plant Boar' piece is mostly unnecessary, but I just love the flavor of making a 'Hedge Hog' and there's a universe where it actually matters with Insidious Roots and Nissa, Voice of Zendikar.
 
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I think I'll yoink this and retire Fiery Temper (or just run them both?)

I prefer the higher floor on this one though, so more than just the discard deck will run it.

Maybe you'll be interested in some alt art? (I can adjust the frames as desired)
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You might also be interested in my Strangle variant
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Cheeky way to turn on delirium (like Tarfire), and I have some customs that touch on vampires in the yard. Everything is Gwent art I'm trying to track down the actual artists for.
 
Damn. Those flaming skeleton arts are almost as bad ass as my flaming Hawaiian shirt,

I liked the original art on Adept because it ties it to Avatar. Adept has a lot of extra words on it as is to make it work how you want. What if it was Creaturefall instead? I dunno. Another thought, maybe swap the Vigilance ability for "If you control N+ lands, earthbend 2 instead"?
 
You could go with something like:

Earthbending Adept - {1}{G}
Creature - Human Shaman
Landfall - Whenever a land enters the battle under your control, put a +1/+1 counter on a permanent you control that isn't this one. If this is the second time this ability was triggered this turn, earthbend 1 instead.
2/2

Going tall instead of wide lets you keep the excitement from racking up triggers by dumping a ton of lands on the battlefield without having to worry about looping or faffing around with templating too much. It does let you infinitely ramp off of a fetch once you've earthbent it once, but I feel like that's not actually that big of a problem because the effect's stapled to a 2/2 that can't grow itself.

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most the earthbending abilities feel pretty overcosted

I think they costed earthbending pretty well... with the caveat that they seem to have approached it as a pseudo-token mechanic first and a way to get cute with fetches and Wasteland and the like as a fun little side bonus.
 
You could go with something like:

Earthbending Adept - {1}{G}
Creature - Human Shaman
Landfall - Whenever a land enters the battle under your control, put a +1/+1 counter on a permanent you control that isn't this one. If this is the second time this ability was triggered this turn, earthbend 1 instead.
2/2
Oh this is very clever! Having to hit double lands drops to earthbend is probably the right balance so it doesn't get totally out of hand.
I also like how if you have no other creatures you can at least store the counters on a land for later (kind of like Black Panther, Wakandan King, which as a side note is kinda busted with Earthbending)
I'm debating if it should specify 'whenever a land enters during your turn' to allow for some more counter-play, because otherwise 2 earthbent lands (even if they're just 1/1's) become a nightmare for your opponent to attack into, but I guess that just goes back to needing to remove the adept itself, which shouldn't be too hard to do.

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@KeithCubes I'd go with the version that works on villain's turn, personally.

because otherwise 2 earthbent lands (even if they're just 1/1's) become a nightmare for your opponent to attack into

To put things in perspective, setting that up with just Earthbending Adept would take four land drops across two turns if villain doesn't interact with you and you'd need to double-landfall again to "reset" the Chump Blocking Nightmare. That's not something you have to worry about unless testing shows that it comes up frequently.

Like, the following guy is better than Earthbending Adept at setting up nasty combat math, and it honestly looks pretty reasonable for a modern rare:

Highspire Cultivator
- {1}{G}
Creature - Elf Artificer (R)
Vigilance
{T}: Create a tapped 1/1 colorless Servo artifact creature token, then put a +1/+1 counter on target creature you control. Activate only if two or more lands entered the battlefield under your control this turn.
2/2
 
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