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I completely misread that you meant:After a hand workshopping a design for an entirely hybrid custom LRW/SHM cube. The goal is a mardu bomb rare that acts as a virtual fog or temporary Ghostly Prison by punishing one attack - Instant, enchantment, whatever - themed after the r/w Lorwyn Giants and w/b Shadowmoor Hags.
The goal for this design is to buy time by creating an incentive for your opponent to attack small, and for the card to get better when you have blockers - creating a tension between attacking with enough creatures to trigger the enchantment, but not so many that you get blown out by no blocks being declared. It's also just a sort-of Fog if you have no creatures out, as only one creature will attack into it unless lethal is being threatened.
As is, the templating feels ambiguous (How many is "that many" - as written I'm pretty sure it would check the number of creatures who dealt damage but I kind of want it to check the amount of damage dealt) and clunky, and I'm not quite sure how to fix it while keeping the card clean and legible. On top of that, I'm not sure it's quite hitting the mark gameplay-wise, so I'm totally open to a complete redesign, and I'm also trying to come up with a name that works both for a feudkiller giant vibe and hag-y/witchy revenge spell - something involving holding a grudge would be great because that also hits the Duergar flavor-wise but I'm clean out of ideas.
Yay you made it human-readable! Thank-you <3Whenever a creature deals combat damage it’s controller sacrifices THAT MANY non-lands permanents and you sacrifice ~.
Yep! The hope is, you buy a turn or two so you can actually advance your own game-plan. I kind of don't want wraths for this format but there's got to be some replacement for the Wx control decks to create a tempo-breaking moment and this was the first idea I had that I felt had legs flavour-wise. Its also has that Lorwyn/Shadowmoor "on-board effect that massively complicates combat" thing going for it which I, uh.... happen to quite like.So you will get either alpha striked, token bashed, or flying manned?
Doesn’t this leads to board stalls?
Well, the controller of the enchantment gets an attack when that player plays the enchantment. The other turns not since your opponent won’t attack or break it with something simple.Yay you made it human-readable! Thank-you <3
Yep! The hope is, you buy a turn or two so you can actually advance your own game-plan. I kind of don't want wraths for this format but there's got to be some replacement for the Wx control decks to create a tempo-breaking moment and this was the first idea I had that I felt had legs flavour-wise. Its also has that Lorwyn/Shadowmoor "on-board effect that massively complicates combat" thing going for it which I, uh.... happen to quite like.
Whether it actually does any of that in a way that's fun or interesting, well, that I'm not so sure on - which is why I want to workshop the concept rather than commit to the initial idea.
I genuinely don't know - it feels like an easy effect to get out from under unless the board already has a few creatures on both sides, in which case yeah it potentially exacerbates the problem, but it also incentivizes the controller of the enchantment to attack (After all, the crack back will be punishing for the opponent unless it's actually lethal).
Edit: Also, how's "Promise of Retribution" for a name? Still a bit meh?
Might be a more interesting effect if it just dealt the same amount of damage divided as you choose among any number of targets?
oough I'd love to see somebody brew up something in The Custom Lab with that name lol
Alright. You asked for it!make it a 1 drop, frees up space
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Okay sourcing 20 individual rainbow land arts is a lot of work, so I'm just going to link you Anthony Avon (No relation)'s art page:Usually I don't love asking for art, as one could always search a little more themselves, but now it is different. I am looking for 20 different, awesome and fitting artworks for my 20 Prismatic Vistas about to be printed. Anyone motivated to help me out a little?
holy heck Ninjatic can PAINT, thanks for this fellaKirk Quilaquil (a.k.a. Ninjatic) has some amazing scenery as well.
Edit: Oh, and Jesse Barnes's painting might be a good fit as well. It's a bit of a hassle to find good quality examples of his work, but he paints stuff like this.
Blacksmithy's suggestion of looking at actual real paintings gave me a great idea. If you're looking for landscapes that evoke that 'prismatic' feeling to some degree, what about the Group of Seven? I think Tom Thomson would be a good place to start your search.Usually I don't love asking for art, as one could always search a little more themselves, but now it is different. I am looking for 20 different, awesome and fitting artworks for my 20 Prismatic Vistas about to be printed. Anyone motivated to help me out a little?