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girls......we all put our bras on one leg at a time......why are we fighting??????

here are 10 cards I designed recently which I think are strong designs. thanks
 

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Chris Taylor

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Personally I put my cards into play rotated 180 degrees so my opponent can read them and then misplay because I didn't read them
girls......we all put our bras on one leg at a time......why are we fighting??????

here are 10 cards I designed recently which I think are strong designs. thanks
Personally I'd remove the "kind of" from the flavor text of End of the Jeskai
 
@safra
Those are brilliant! Especially the Mountain Forest Lion (shouldn’t it be in this order?)

Have you considered adding ‘unless you have The Floor is Lava deal 6 damage to you.” to the last line of text?
 
Just researched a bit.

For some reason the regions are called 'Mountain Forests' but the animal is called 'Forest Mountain Lions'. Kind of weird. That's why I got it mixed up. I wanted the Mountain Forest to go together like this.. to match the region. But the animal is named like Safra's perfect design.
 
wow, i didn't know any of these, i only had heard the name "mountain lion" before that apparently is another animal (i think it is what i would call the "puma"?). crazy things. english is not my main language, it has a lot of weird stuff going on with the order of words ahaha
 
wow, i didn't know any of these, i only had heard the name "mountain lion" before that apparently is another animal (i think it is what i would call the "puma"?). crazy things. english is not my main language, it has a lot of weird stuff going on with the order of words ahaha

To be fair, it also isn't Velrun's. ;)

Mountain lion as a term covers both the cougar and the puma. As a native speaker, "forest mountain lion" sounds really artificial, and wouldn't refer to a type of mountain lion - "[PLACE NAME] Mountain" is a common construction, so I'd read that as "lion from a place called Forest Mountain" before I'd read it as "mountain lion from a forest". The only thing that actually comes up if I look up "forest mountain lion" is a folk-rock musician named Forest Mountain Lion, which breaks down as first name Forest, last name Mountain Lion.

The joke behind the card is that Tiger and Taiga sound really similar, and that it breaks normal Magic formatting in order to have "Mountain Lion" in the typeline. I wouldn't read into it much more than that.
 
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